Please help me with homework!?
1. I am editorial an essay and i need help with finding errors.
2.also i exigency help coming up with a last sentence in the 2nd body paragraph.
3. i do not like the conclusion paragraph. do you have any suggestions?
I will try to inform appropriate. I'm only in 10th grade, but I'll surely give you some feedback!
At the end of the first paragraph "The function of one of the most efficient ways to make a smoothie will be determined through the







